SEE DOCTOR
Last weekend,i had a bad headache,so i decided to see the doctor.when i walked to the roadside and saw the bus which i wanted to catch was passing.Yet the next bus will arrive at least ten minutes later.
I had no sooner arrived at the bus stop than i was assailed by a motorcycle driver who said the bus has just passed and wanted me to take his motorcycle to get the destination i will go.I asked him the price to hospital.he said that he can let me go there for only fifty Yuan.I grudged paying him so much money for this distance and indicating that i wanted another cheaper one,then i began to walk away.The man immediately said the price can be reduced to thirty Yuan as a special favour.he went to great lengths to prove that his price is the most cheaper,as we were bargainning continuously,the bus was coming,i got rid of him and got on the bus rapidly,The man kept throwing his arms and saw my figure in dispair!
NOTE:as above is my composition after learning NEW CONCEPT 3,LESSON 28,in this composition,the after article several important phraseses in NOTES ON THE TEXT were used .waiting for your correction,thanks a lot !
学完<新概念英语3>第28课,我用课后的课文注释中的重要短语写了这篇小作文,期望能得到你的修改,谢谢!!
上周末,我头痛,决定去看医生.当我走到马路边时,看到我要乘坐的巴士正经过了,而下一班至少要10分钟后.
我一到公交站就被一个摩托车司机缠住了,他说公交车刚走,要我坐他的摩托车去我的目的地,我问他到医院去的价格,他说只需50元就可送我到那里,我不想为这段路程付他这么多钱并表明我想找另一个更便宜些的.然后开始离开,那人立即说作为一种特别的优惠,价格可以降到30元,并竭力想证明他的价格是最便宜的.正当我们还在讨价还价的时候,公交车来了,我迅速摆脱他并上了公交车,那人绝望地举起双手并看着我的背影离去!
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