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A Busy Morning What a busy morning is it today!This morning I hope to sleep a lie-in and get up at 8 o 'clock.But it's our turn to team cleaning area.It is so bad that I need to get up early.Our school implement the new policy but we do not konw the reason,Our students have no choice, even the right to konw are deprived.I am a bit of angry.We need to clean a large place.Worst of all,there are four trash cans in our cleaner area,Other class put rubbish in them,so we have to clean the rubbish.I don't know what happened in our school.But I hope our school can hire sanitation.Why do not our school hire the sanitation any more,I really do not want to spend the half-time doing that.

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A Busy Morning

What a busy morning is it I've got today! This morning I hope to sleep have a lie-in and get up at 8 o 'clock,but it's our turn to team cleaning area (I'm not sure what you mean here. Perhaps "It's our turn to clean the team area"?).It is so bad that I need to get up early.Our school has implemented the a new policy but we do not know the reason why. Our students have no choice, even the right to konw are deprived we haven't even been told why.I am a bit of angry.We need to clean a large place area.Worst of all there are four trash cans in our cleaner area the area we have to clean. Other classes put rubbish in them, so we have to clean the rubbish.I don't know what happened in our school, but I hope our school can hire sanitation cleaners. Why do not our school hire the sanitation any more Why doesn't our school hire cleaners anymore? I really do not want to spend the half-time my free time doing that it.

 

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