correct my essay please.

In today's globalized society, it is widely believed that making new friends isare more important than keeping old onesfriends. Some people have advocated that new friends help people broaden their perspective.However, I disagree with this view. I firmly believe that keeping old friends isare more important. This is because first, old friends are more reliable. Ssecond, old friends remind us of our past. 

First of all, old friends are reliable. In other words, I can tell them everything even private secrets because they do know me and they will not blame me. They are also friends are good listeners. 
For example, when my pet which I have taken cared of since grow up with my childhood died. I called to my old friends and I wear my heart on my sleeve and I could put myself at easey. Thus, talking with old friends can lighten the burdens. 

In addition, old friends remind us of our past because, we have built our memorable experiences as well as some of the biggest highlight of our (since you're talking about "our" in the previous line, you should be consistent all thorughout the sentence) my livfes have occurred with our my old friends. When I'm with Jenny-not only when we party together-we have no idea where we will end up but also I will always cherish our anecdotes., For example, when I was fourteen, years old I lost the books I borrowed from the library. I did not know what I had to do but Jenny helped me to find out ("find out" is usually used if you're looking for information, but If you're looking for lost items, you usually use "find" only) the book at the cost of her academy. Sso when we're together, we often share (or maybe reminisce is a better term) our dear, old memories. This example shows that we can spend quality time bywith sharing memories. 


In conclusion, it is my belief that keeping an old friend is essential. As I stateds, old friends are reliable and can share our dear experiences. Thus, we should keep ours old relationships.

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Nice essay there! Good job!

I also think that keeping old friends is important. But making new ones is also equally important. We just have to balance them out. ^-^