Introduction

Hiii everyone,
My name is Seristirah, but you can call me with Tira. I am 26 years old. I'm come from Indonesia. Does anyone know about my country? If you want to know more about my country you can ask me, and i will be glad to show you.
I'm here to learn English language, I'm will be happy if you can help me.
Thank you.

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Introduction

Hi everyone,
My name is Seristirah, but you're you can call me with Tira. I am 26 years old. i"m I'm come from Indonesia. Does anyone know about my country? If you wanna want to know more about my country you can ask me, and I will be glad to show tell you.
I'm here to learn English language, and i'm I will be happy when you're if you can help me.
Thank you.

introduction

hiii everyone,
my name is seristirah but you're can call me with tira,i am 26 years old. i"m come from indonesia. anyone know about my country? if you wanna know more about my country you can ask me, I will be glad to show you.
i'm here to learn english language, i'm will be happy when you're can help me.
thank you.