My Ambition

I am an Engineering student and I graduated as an Electrical engineer in 2011. I did not get a jump start in my career that I always hoped for and what happened was exactly the opposite - I stayed unemployed for a long time.

My ambition is to become a good and a better engineer than I am right now. One day I'll make it. I am willing to give my 100% dedication to my work. The job that I have now is far away from my home. In fact, it is in another country, but the opportunity to grow as an engineer is there and I hope I will do just that.

Staying unemployed taught me one thing, and that is the importance and need of an ambition. One may face different kind of problems while following their ambition, but it is no reason to stop believing. I am not giving up on my ambitions just yet. This may be the start I was waiting for to enable me to get to my goal.

[Good English.  Remember to leave a space after all periods and commas.  Good luck.]