The Great Day
Today we celebrate the Victory Day in the Great Patriotic War (1941-1945). There were feast parade in every small and large city of Russia. We appreciate veterans of War for their valor and courage in fighting against fascism.
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The Great Day
Today we celebrate the Victory Day in the Great Patriotic War (1941-1945). There were feast parades in every small and large city of Russia. We show our appreciation to veterans of the War for their valor and courage in fighting against fascism.
[Good. "Show our appreciation to" is more natural, though just "appreciate" would have been correct, strictly speaking.]
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you should use plural with 'were'. `feast parades`. well done!
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hello :)
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