May,8,2013
It was fine in the forenoon.It began to rain heavy about 13,and last to 22.I like heavy rainfall,but not gental rain which last for long.My roomies and I boiled noodles for dinner in our dormitory instead went to the school canteen.
And I fell over myself because of the smooth sole and the wet floor,when I was preparing to have a shower tonight.it's hurt all over the body and I got a skined arm.
It must be a beautiful day tomorrow.Nice dream!
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May,8,2013
It was fine in the morning. It began to rain heavily about 13:00,and lasted until 22:00. I like heavy rainfall, but not gental rain that lasts for a long time. My roomies and I boiled noodles for dinner in our dormitory instead going to the school canteen.
Also, I fell over myself because of the smooth sole and the wet floor when I was preparing to have a shower tonight. It hurts all over the body and I have a skinned arm.
It must be a beautiful day tomorrow. Nice dreams!
[Good work. 'Forenoon' is correct, but not used very much. Remember to put a space after all periods and commas.]
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