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diary--1 i'll take an examination in this Friday,but i'm not confident of pass the examination,and bored a lot of class.in my opinion, there's no use attending class.i'm really hope the views are wrong. actually,i'm diligent in my study,i like reading ,and also i'm good at independent thinking,i'm never echo the views of others . you know,in china,many people have no sense of right, but i known the civil rights. may China more and more democracy. these is my first short article.i known it's full of wrong sentence. but just like the slogan"just do it" ,i'll keep moving...

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diary--1

I have an examination this friday but i'm not confident of passing. I am bored of  the classes. In my opinion, there is no use attending classes.i'm really hope the views are wrong.
Actually, I'm diligent in my study, I like reading and I'm also good at independent thinking. I never echo the views of others . In china many people have no sense of rights, but I know the civil rights.
may China more and more democracy.
This is my first short article. I know that  it's full of wrong sentencs but just like the slogan "just do it" , I'll keep moving...

*** Always use captital "I" for yourself. (I have an examination...)
***i'm really hope the views are wrong.  -> Maybe you mean to say "I really hope that my views are wrong".
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I never echo the views of others  -> "I never criticise the views of others"
may China more and more democracy. -> "May China be a more democratic nation"


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