Caro amazing adventure.
One day,Caro went to hiking,she read the map,and she going straight on,she saw a man,he’s ran hurry:he might miss his date,Caro think.
When she arrived,she see she made a big mistake,the tree house is overlap than the W.C! “Oh,my god!” she said,she trun left,walk 700 metres,and trun right,know,she’s completely get lost!
She is too upsat,she sat down,and crying:”Wwwwwww....” “whey are you crying?” the voice ask,Caro look up,and then,she saw the most amazing thing in her life,there is a man,he dress a write tuxedo,and he is look for her,”I’m Mr.haven,and I’m glad to help you,Caro pop her eyes,”Are you a god?” she ask,”NoNoNo,I’m Mr.haven,I is I god is god,I saw you get lost,so I;m came to help you to walk out is forest!” “Thank you very much! But I’m very hungry ,I haven’t eat anything this moring!”
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Caro's amazing adventure.
One day, Caro went to hiking, she read the map and she and {got going} {straight away} on,she saw a man,he’s ran he was running in a hurry:he might miss have missed his date,Caro think thought.
When she arrived, she see saw that she had made a big mistake,the tree house is was overlapping than the W.C! “Oh,my god!” she said, she truned left,walked 700 metres,and truned right, know she’s completely get lost!
She is was too (so) upset,she sat down,and crying cried :”Wwwwwww....” “why are you crying?” the a voice asked ,Caro looked up and then she saw the most amazing thing in her life, there is a man, he is dressed in a wite tuxedo and he is looking for her,”I’m Mr.haven,and I’m glad to help you,Caro pop?? opened her eyes,”Are you a god?” she asked,”NoNoNo,I’m Mr.haven,I is am god is god,I saw you getting lost so I came to help you to and walk you out of the forest!” “Thank you very much! But I’m very hungry ,I haven’t eat anything this moring!”
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