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Young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible.What is your opinion? Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible.Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time.Well,in the point of my view,I definitely prefer to choose independence from my parents as soon as possible.There are several reason as follows. First and foremost,a sense of independence that the decreasing tendency in our society,also can develop ourselves some other personality feature,such as a virtue of patience etc.Take my personal experience for example,In my childhood ,so wired was i that my parents always spoil me about everything,and when i grow up ,i am go out to go to university.At the time passing by,I find that my demerit of my mind include something that wired ,grumpiness and so on is disappeared.you could not believe that,but this is a true story of mine. In addition,some adults, especially girls,has many mannerism that meet to some terrible thing would be cry and make as if what tease her.That is word alway says as a buzzword"princess disease".so i advocate that adults should keep independence in our life instead of rely on our families . Ultimately,the time to live independently depends on the person himself .He or she must decide whether they are ready to leave their parents to have a independent life or not .The decision will vary from one person to another.A person should judge that he is capable of fulfilling his needs without being dependent on his parents;this indicates that he is ready for his independent life.Otherwise he might need to stay longer with his parents.

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I suppose that young adults must leave parents' home as quickly as posible.

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