to my mother
Once studied hard under the desk lamp at night,
I appreciated the precious care from mother.
Honestly wish distant parents happy and healthy,
Only by sending the carnation in the dream.
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to my mother
Once, studied studying hard under the desk lamp at night,
I appreciated my mother's precious care the precious care from mother.,
Honestly wishing my distant parents happy and healthy
Only by sending the a carnation in the a dream.
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Hello Nile and Andre, if there is the cultural difference, is there any word can be used in replace of carnation without change the plant of the poem?
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Nile, thanks. I have not a blog yet. Perhaps I shall build one according to your suggestions.
For "the", you mean that its frequent use will destroy beauty of the poems, don't you?
Thanks!
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hi andre, yes i heard about that too, especially in few european countries they carry Carnations to cemeteries. but it is symbolical of pure love as well and appears on mother's day especially. do u have this tradition in Italy?
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what an assortment of words and poetry!
jessicacusia do you keep a blog?
ur poems are very nice, personally i'd suggest no to use "the" so frequently, poms sound sweeter when more generalised.
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