We fall in love
I met a nice boy and we fall in love. I feel very happy since I hadn't experienced campus love. He is a good boy with many merits and his brilliant performance in student union can be the encouragement of me. Moreover we can compete and learn from each other.
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We fell in love
I met a nice boy and we fell in love. I feel very happy since I hadn't experienced campus love before. He is a good boy with many merits and his brilliant performance in the student union can be an encouragement of me. Moreover, we can compete together and learn from each other.
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We fell in love
I met a nice boy and we fell in love. I felt very happy since I hadn't experienced campus love. He is a good boy with many merits. His brilliant performance in the student union is my inspiration. Moreover we compete and learn from each other.
-- "is my inspiration" sounds better than "the encouragement of me"
-- take note of the tenses :)
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