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some thing about TVD TVD is short for The Vampire Dairies my favorite TV play.I finished 4 seasons over last two weeks.And now I am dying for season 5 and the derive play The Originals.Actually I prefer The Orignals for the only reason of the protagonist Joseph Morgan who played the big bad Klaus in TVD.In the very beginning I feared with this guy because he was pure evil and bad enough to be killed thousand times but as he had played 7 or 8 episodes I gradually found the sensitive side to Klause.He is a hybrid and escaped from being killed by his father for 1000 years.He was powerful numb but lonely .Until came across the beautiful vampire Caroline he began to change.Love is the most weak part of vampires so does people.maybe in my deep heart there is an evil like my beloved Klause.He is horrible and beautiful.I hate him and then I love him.It is like I want to throw him off a cliff then rush to the bottom to catch him.nothing is more beautiful than romanticizing the possibilities:)And I have to say that I do not like Elina.She is beautiful and kind but just too perfect and her character changed too unreasonable in season 4.I admire the character of Rebeca's.She dare to love and dare to hate but her weakness is her potencial humanity as an orignal vampire.OK just my personal point of view.should you guys help me make my composition better?

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some thing about TVD

TVD is short for The Vampire Dairies, which is my favorite TV play.I finished 4 seasons over last two weeks.And now I am dying for season 5 and the derive play The Originals.Actually I prefer The Orignals for the only reason of the The only reason why I prefer The Originals is because of protagonist, Joseph Morgan, who played the big bad Klaus in TVD.In the very beginning I feared with this guy because he was pure evil and bad enough to be killed thousand times. But as he had played 7 or 8 episodes I gradually discovered the sensitive side to Klause.He was a hybrid and escaped the chase of from being killed by his father for 1000 years.He was powerful numb but lonely . He was always cold blooded, until came across the beautiful vampire, Caroline began to change.Love is the most weak part of vampires, so does people.maybe in my deep heart there is an evil side like my beloved Klause.He is horrible and but beautiful.I hate him, meanwhile I can't help falling in love with him.It is like I want to throw him off a cliff then rush to the bottom to catch him.nothing is more beautiful than this kind of deadly romance romanticizing the possibilities:)And I have to say that I do not like Elina.She is beautiful and kind but just too perfect, and her character changed too unreasonablely in season 4.I admire the character of Rebeca's.She dared to love and dared to hate. but However, her weakness is that her potencial humanity performs as an orignal vampire.OK Above is just my personal point of view.should May you guys help me make my composition better?

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I also watched a bit of The Vampire Dairies with my friend because I was forced to since I was at her house and she is like totally addicted to it XD It's not bad but i'm hoping for more too :P
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some things about TVD

TVD is short for The Vampire Dairies my favorite TV play.I finished 4 seasons over last two weeks.And now I am dying for season 5 and the derive play The Originals.Actually I prefer The Orignals for the only reason of the protagonist Joseph Morgan who played the big bad Klaus in TVD.In the very beginning I feared with this guy because he was pure evil and bad enough to be killed thousand times but as he had played 7 or 8 episodes I gradually found the sensitive side to Klause.He is a hybrid and escaped from being killed by his father for 1000 years.He was powerful numb but lonely .Until came across the beautiful vampire Caroline he began to change.Love is the most weak part of vampires so does people.maybe in my deep heart there is an evil like my beloved Klause.He is horrible and beautiful.I hate him and then I love him.It is like I want to throw him off a cliff then rush to the bottom to catch him.nothing is more beautiful than romanticizing the possibilities:)And I have to say that I do not like Elina.She is beautiful and kind but just too perfect and her character changed too unreasonable in season 4.I admire the character of Rebeca's.She dare to love and dare to hate but her weakness is her potencial humanity as an orignal vampire.OK just my personal point of view.should you guys help me make my composition better?

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