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My daughter's first birthday I think that becoming a parent is a wonderful experience, an experience that changes every day. The daughter's first birthday is for a father a day in which one can run with mind againg through the varied moments of past year. I firstly remind the exciting moment of the birth, and then the first time I took her to home, her first smiles, her overnight weepings, her first tooth, her first spoken words, her whims and many other things. So her first birthday was for me an important day to celebrate in the best way. I organized a party with my relatives and my friends.It was a sort of picnic in a park nearby my house. There was the sunshine, it was perfect for the children to play in the park. My daughter doesen't walk yet, but she can crawling so other children played with her and gave her many gifts. She also spent a good time, and this is the most important result. I took many photos and helped my wife to prepare food and beverages for the guests and games for the children. I had also the opportunity to meet my brother again after a lot of time, because he lives in another city. He brought a beautiful and delicious cake with the words 'happy birthday'. It can be look like a very normal party, but it was very special for me! I can't wait for the next birthday!

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My daughter's first birthday.

I think that becoming a parent is a wonderful thing, an experience that changes every day. The daughter's first birthday is for a father a day in which he can look back and remember the many moments of his childs life from the past year.
I firstly remind Firstly I am reminded of the exciting moment of the birth, and then the first time I took her home, her first smiles, her crying during the night, her first tooth, her first spoken words, her whims and many other things.
So her first birthday was for me an important day to celebrate in the best way. I organized a party with my relatives and my friends.It was a sort of picnic in a park nearby my house.
There was sunshine which made it perfect for the children to play in the park. My daughter doesen't doesn't walk yet but she can crawling crawl, so the other children played with her and gave her many gifts. She had a good time and this that is the most important thing result.
I took many photos and helped my wife to prepare food and beverages for the guests and games for the children. I had also the opportunity to meet my brother again after a lot of time, because he lives in another city. He brought a beautiful and delicious cake with the words 'happy birthday'.
It can be may look like a very normal party, but it was very special for me!
I can't wait for the next birthday!

 

Great work, sounds like you had a wonderful day. A very nice entry to read!

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