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Much alcohol can´t be drunk I was at the party on saturday evening organized by my brother in law. There were a band of musicians playing drums and bagpipes. We were drinking red and white wine and when we were drunk we started dancing around a bonfire. All of a sudden, one of the guest, due to the alcohol, fell into the ground and injury himself in his forehead. Another guest tried to help him and the wounded´s brother get really angry to him and stand up to him in a defensive posture. The ones we were there they didn´t know what to do so we asked him if he wanted to go to the hospital. He denied to go to the hospital and what we did was healed his wounded with hydrogen peroxide and some gauzes. Until that moment we had a really good time. The worst of all was the following day hungover.

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Much alcohol can´t be drunk

Don't drink too much alcohol

I was at a party on Saturday evening organized by my brother in law. There was a band of musicians playing drums and bagpipes. We were drinking red and white wine and when we were drunk we started dancing around a bonfire. All of a sudden, one of the guests, due to the alcohol, fell on to the ground and injured himself on his forehead. Another guest tried to help him and the wounded person's brother got really angry to him and stood up to him in a defensive posture. We who were there didn´t know what to do so we asked him if he wanted to go to the hospital. He denied to go to the hospital and what we did was treat his wound (or wounded forehead) with hydrogen peroxide and some gauzes. Until that moment we had a really good time. The worst of all was the hangover the following day.

 

Good job! Sounds like it was fun in the beginning at least... Let me know if you want explanations to any of the corrections!

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