我的中文的名字 (speaking practice)

I improvised when speaking, so there are lots of pauses in the recording. Here is (roughly) what I said:

你们好.。 我叫Joshua。 我的中文的名字是叫“昭华”。你们觉得我的中文的名字好不好? 我是澳大利亚人, 所以我的母语是英语. 我现在说的汉语说得不好， 但是我想学习汉语. 谢谢你.

Most of the pauses were me trying to figure out how to say the upcoming tones.
Can you please fix my accent?
你们可以糾正我的口音吗?

我的中文的名字 (speaking practice)

I improvised when speaking, so there are lots of pauses in the recording. Here is (roughly) what I said:

你们好！我叫Joshua，我的中文名字是“昭华”。 你们觉得我的中文名字好不好? 我是澳大利亚人，所以我的母语是英语。我现在说汉语说得不好，但是我想学习汉语。谢谢你！

Most of the pauses were me trying to figure out how to say the upcoming tones.
Can you please fix my accent?
你们可以糾正我的口音吗?

你好！很遗憾，听不见。

我的中文的名字——我的中文名（字） (speaking practice)

I improvised when speaking, so there are lots of pauses in the recording. Here is (roughly) what I said:

你们好. 我叫Joshua. 我的中文的名（字）是'昭华'. 你们觉得我的中文的名（字）好不好? 我是澳大利亚人, 所以我的母语是英语. 我现在说汉语说得不好（this sentence is right, but not very widely used, most of the time we say, 现在我汉语说得不好)， 但是我想学习汉语. 谢谢你们(seems that it doesn't make good sense here to say thank you suddenly, better cut it off.).

Most of the pauses were me trying to figure out how to say the upcoming tones.
Can you please fix my accent?
你们可以糾正我的口音吗?(你们可以纠正我的发音吗？发音fa1 yin1 =pronunciation. 口音kou3 yin1=accent)