On the Way
Because of the journey yesterday,I felt really tired and take a nap after lunch.The weather in May is still a little cold,at least it was today,so I kept wearing a thick quilt when sleeping,which made me sweat profusely in my dream.However,the quilt is necessary during the interim period.And I am in a interim too,not for seasons but my life,in which I have something necessary as well.For exsample I hve to continue my edu,have to apply visa,have to experience and even have to fail.I am still on the way,I still need the courage to make my dreams come true.
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On the Way
Because of the journey yesterday, I felt really tired and took a nap after lunch.The weather in May is still a little cold, at least it was today, so I kept wearing a thick quilt when sleeping, which made me sweat profusely in my dream. However, the quilt is necessary during the interim period. Also, I am in a interim too, not for seasons, but my life, in which I have something necessary as well. For exsample, I have to continue my education, have to apply visa, have to experience and even have to fail. I am still on the way, and I still need the courage to make my dreams come true.
[Good work. Minor correction - leave a space after all periods and commas. It is the rule, and it makes reading it much easier.]
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