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My home
Hello! in my class asked me to describe my home.
My house is very spacious for two persons people (plural), it has two floors is a two story house On the first floor it has a small kitchen, living room, dining room, bathroom and my mom´s bedroom of my mom, between living room and dinning room is the staircase. The bedroom is small; there is a double bed, a closet, a shelf, a lamp, a night table and the TV.
On the second floor it has two bedrooms There are two bedrooms on the second floor, the guest´s room and my room. In my room there are is a double bed, a TV next to the radio, two lamps, a green rug, four shelves, a chair, a night table, and a closet newt to the large mirror on the wall. In the other room, there are is a single bed, a closet, an armchair and a shelf.
One the front yard there are two threes, and many plants, my mom loves plants. On the back yard there are two threes in the backyard too, a large flower bed next the path and a shed.
Hola Lizzie, mi nombre es Uri Quintal. Soy un maestro de español e ingles graduado de una universidad en los Estados Unidos. Encontre algunos errores en tu gramatica, mismos que marqué con color azul y corregi utilizando color rojo. Ofrezco algunas clases basicas para desarrollar un ingles conversacional correcto, al mismo tiempo que dedico tiempo para pulir tu habilidad de pensar e incluso soñar en un segundo idioma. Estos cursos los estoy ofreciendo por un precio bastante bajo y accesible, si te interesa puedes contactarme por aqui mismo o en skype como Uriquintal, te deseo pases un excelente dia! :)
My home
Hello! my class asked me to describe my home.
My house is very spacious for two people, it has two floors. On the first floor it has a small kitchen, living room, dining room, bathroom and the bedroom of my mom, between the living room and dining room is the staircase. The bedroom is small; there is a double bed, a closet, a shelf, a lamp, a night table and the TV.
On the second floor it has two bedrooms, the guest room and my room. In my room there is a double bed, a TV next to the radio, two lamps, a green rug, four shelves, a chair, a night table, and a closet next to the large mirror on the wall. In the other room, there is a single bed, a closet, an armchair and a shelf.
In the front yard there are two trees, and many plants, my mom loves plants. In the back yard are two trees too, a large flower bed next to the path and a shed.
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