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Freedom in 18 days. I still live with my parents because I'm a student at Mannheim University of Applied Sciences and the University is not very far from my Home. In 18 days my parents will go on holiday for a month. During that month I will be home alone, like the Kevin in the movie 'Home Alone'. :) I look forward to live that month alone! While that month I can sleep, eat or learn for my study where I want. I could sleep in my bed, living room or wasted next to the cat toilet. :D

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Freedom in 18 days.

I still live with my parents because I'm a student at Mannheim University of Applied Sciences and the my University is not very far from my  * Hhome. In 18 days my parents will go on holiday for a month. During that month I will be home alone, like the Kevin in the movie 'Home Alone'. :) I look forward to live that month alone!** While During/In that month I can sleep, eat or learn revise for my studies where I want. I could sleep in my bed, living room or wasted next to the cat toilet. :D

 

*You can say 'the university' it's fine, but it doesn't sound too great! If you use my suggestion to say 'my university', you can eliminate the 'my' which is next to home.

 

** Sounds a little odd, but I get what you're saying. You could simply say 'I'm looking forward to it!'

Your month alone sounds like it's going to be great!

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Freedom in 18 days.

I still live with my parents because I'm a student at Mannheim University of Applied Sciences and the University is not very far from my home. In 18 days my parents will go on holiday for a month. During that month I will be home alone, like Kevin in the movie 'Home Alone'. :) I look forward to living that month alone! During that month I can sleep, eat or learn for my study where I want. I could sleep in my bed, in the living room or wasted next to the cat toilet. :D

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oh. that's why you dont even try to go to school today. so bad. :D
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The English in this was very good! Only a few things that had to be fixed. Sounds just as good as any other English speaker :)

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