Happy day c:
An American friend and I went to Happy Valley yesterday, it's a playgroud, we tried the roller roasters for about 5 times.
we screamed and laughed a lot all day long. I hurt my throat in the end ;_; Anyway, it's a amazing place, though it's not better than the one in Florida, lol, he told me this. I'm sure I'll go there again.
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Happy day c:
An American friend and I went to Happy Valley yesterday, it's a playground, we tried the roller coaster for about 5 times.
we screamed and laughed a lot all day long. I hurt my throat in the end ;_; Anyway, it's an amazing place, though it's not better than the one in Florida, lol, he told me this. I'm sure I'll go there again.
The rest of it seems correct :D good job.
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