the second day of May day
Today ,I get up at seven o'clock,my eldest sister told me they have been to Chongqin .she's worried her dogs and a hen ,let me go her house to feed them .my sister has two dogs ,one is the golden ,anthoer is the pooled,we all like them,because they're cute very .my sister lives on the ninth floor without lift ,I'm tired when I reach.when I go to feed them ,the dogs were excited ,the hen is in the cage,they seem hungry,in the garden ,the flowers are very beautiful ,i photo them using a mobile phone camera and sent the photoes to my friends.
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the second day of May day
Today ,I get up at seven o'clock,my eldest sister told me they have been to Chongqing .she's worried about her dogs and a hen ,let me go her house to feed them .my sister has two dogs ,one is the golden ,anthoerthe other is the pooled,we allall of us (better)like them,because they're cute very much.my sister lives onin the ninth floor without lift ,I'mwas so tired when I reached.when I gowent to feed them ,the dogs were excited ,the hen is in the cage,they seemed hungry,in the garden ,the flowers are very beautiful ,i photoed them using(with) a mobile phone camera and sent the photoes to my friends.
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