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My first job . I got my job in computer shop after i was graduation form senior high school . That's job is sales and service man about to fix computer that is very exciting life. my boss always help me to fix the hard stuff . i could to study it from my boss. I had studying many things about to fix computer knowledge and to service customers . I love my first job . Thanks every one to help me.

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My first job .

I got my job in a computer shop after i was graduation I was graduated from senior high school .

In this job we sale and service people about computer repairing. That is a very exciting life.

my boss always helps me to fix the hard stuff. I learn it from my boss.

I had studied many things about fixing computer, knowledge and serving customers .

I love my first job .

Thanks everyone for helping me.


Keep practicing, and good luck with your english. You're doing pretty well :)

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My first job .

I got my job in a computer shop after i was graduation graduated form from senior high school .

That's My job is sales and service man about to fix computers that is very exciting life. which is a very exciting life.

my boss always helps me to fix the hard stuff . i could to can study learn it from my boss.

I had studying studied many things about to fix computer knowledge and to service customers . fixing computers and serving customers.

I love my first job .

Thanks every one to help me. for helping me.

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This was a good topic to practice your English. I enjoyed reading it.

 

My first job .

I got my job in a computer shop, after I was graduated from senior high school. 

The job was in sales and service and included fixing computers. It was a very exciting life.

My boss always helped me to fix the hard stuff, and I learned from my boss.

I had to learn many things about computer knowledge, fixing computers, and servicing customers.

I loved my first job.

Thanks everyone for helping me.

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