This's my way
I'll spread out wings of living up to fly distant to sky
free is like a bird be able to sail trhough those are ocean , Sea , green land , yellow land , and blue land in The beauty world . wiht heart and soul these , I believe that , I'll be able to get that soon . amin . ^_^
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This's This is my way
I'll spread out wings of living up to fly distant to sky
Free is like a bird, be able to sail trhough those are through the ocean and sea. Green land, yellow land, and blue land in The the beauty beautiful world. wiht With heart and soul these, I believe that I'll be able to get that soon. amin . ^_^
How nice :) Poetry is difficult to correct but I fixed a few things to make it easier to read.
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