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today is a nice day
I said today is a nice day that is because today is sunny, i like the sun, and the temperature is comfortable, neither hot nor cold, i like this weather very much, it makes me happy all day.
But in my at the office, I had nothing to do led, and that put me in got a bad mood, i don't have any work to do, just sit seat, boring bored to death,how what can i do next, i am at a loss missing, i don't know what will i do in future further, please instruction me, i need suggestions.
I never seldom write compositon offen, please revise for me all.
Punctuation is written with a space AFTER - comma space, fullstop space ...
Your 'Sentences' seem to be clause after clause after clause, comma comma comma. Keep sentences shorter, and try to organise them - it's the same in Chinese.
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