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Foreign Country Hi everyone. In this writing, I want to tell one of my biggest dreams. That's; go to the foreign country. I really want to see foreign people's lifestyle. Sometimes while I am going to school, I see tourists. Some tourists hold a map and they try to find where they are. At that time, I put myself in their place. I think I am in a country which I don't know anything, anywhere and anyone. It woul be very enjoyable. Think that you are on the bus and talking your friends by phone. Many people can't understand what you are saying. English can be understood many people because today, a lot of people know speaking English. But if you are speaking Turkish, many people can't understand and your conversation draws attention. You can feel the eyes of everyone are on you. Anyway, if I go to foreign country, I will spend a day by see the people. I observe their attitude because I think people are more important than the places. Don't forget, if there is not a person, the places can't be. But I don't say that you shouldn't go to anywhere, you should see the people all of your holiday. Of course you should go to the places which you wonder.

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Foreign Country

Hi everyone. In this writing, I want to tell you one of my biggest dreams. It is to go to the foreign country. I really want to see foreign people's lifestyle. Sometimes while I am going to school, I see tourists. Some tourists hold a map and they try to find where they are. At that time, I put myself in their place. I think I am in a country about which I don't know anything, anywhere and anyone. It woul be very enjoyable. Think that you are on the bus and talking your friends by phone. Many people can't understand what you are saying. English can be understood by many people because today, a lot of people know speaking English. But if you are speaking Turkish, many people can't understand and your conversation draws attention. You can feel the eyes of everyone are on you. Anyway, if I go to a foreign country, I will spend a day just seeing the people. I will observe their attitude, because I think people are more important than the places. Don't forget, if there is not a person, the places can't exist. But I don't say that you shouldn't go to anywhere, but that you should see the people all of your holiday. Of course you should go to the places that you wonder about.

 

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yeah it's nice feeling that's no one understand your speak and all notice when you are answering on your phone hehe, actually i'm tried that feel in these days because I live in Istanbul from 5 months best regards.
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Its ok, i can help you my best to perfect your English..

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