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My Day As I said before I am studying Civil Engineering, I am in the last semester and today I had a work Interview. I was going in a bus but i was going late so i had to go down and take a taxi. I found the place of the interview very fast. I got in and a Engineer interview me, the conversation was going very good until he told me that the work is not in Lima, that if i get the job I Must travel to a City call Iquitos in the jungle. So i will continue searching for a good job to me. After that i went to a mall, all the purses had 50% of discount but only with the mall's card, so i couldn't buy a purse that i liked. It was not a good day for me, but I'm sure that tomorrow will be different. :)

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My Day

As I said before I am studying Civil Engineering, I am in the last semester and today I had a work Interview.

As I said before, I am studying civil engineering. I am in the last semester, so today I had a work interview.

 

I was going in a bus but i was going late so i had to go down and take a taxi. 

I was going there on a bus, but I was late, so I had to go down and take a taxi.


I found the place of the interview very fast.

 

I got in and a Engineer interview me, the conversation was going very good until he told me that the work is not in Lima, that if i get the job I Must travel to a City call Iquitos in the jungle. 

I got it, and an engineer interviewed me. The conversation was going very well until he told me that the work is not in Lima, and that if I get the job, I must travel to a city called Iquitos in the jungle.


So i will continue searching for a good job to me. 

So I will continue searching for a job for me.

 

After that i went to a mall, all the purses had 50% of discount but only with the mall's card, so i couldn't buy a purse that i liked. 

After that, I went to a mall; all the purses were 50% off, but only with the mall's card, so I couldn't buy a purse that I liked.

 

It was not a good day for me, but I'm sure that tomorrow will be different.
:)

 

Great job! Keep on writing. I'm sure a great job will fall into place soon. Nevertheless, be as proactive as you can and scour Lima tenaciously for that perfect job. Don't be afraid as well to lower your expectations a tad, especially for that first job. If you have any questions about the corrections I made, feel free to ask.

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