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My friends and I were having a little chat on ghosts. Are they real? .One of my friend said that he saw a ghost near his house and that he is afraid to walk through that area.(From his bus stop to his home, he had to walk through this path everyday) There was a cemetery near by this path . So basically we were all afraid then decided that we are going to fight this fear that we have, together. So we all gathered the next day to check that empty area thoroughly so that we(especially my friend) will not be afraid anymore to walk or run through that path.
It was night. We all took a bus to reach this cemetary. We were a group of 4 and all were anxious, excited and some what afraid.
The bus reached the stop. We all got off.The cemetery was very near and it was total silence all around........
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The path wend its way between headstones, with a low fence either side. At a distance, on the right-hand side was the low glimmer of, a cigarette? And the distant low murmur of several voices, speaking lowly. The glimmer moved towards the fence and the voices stopped as we came closer. Silhouetted against the last sliver of the old moon were, oh 5, 6 no eight figures. Quite silent. We looked behind us without speaking, and there were three more there.
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Here is my version of it.
We came very close to the cemetery. Suddenly an old man jumped infront of us. He said "what are you kids doing here. Go back to home.This is a very dangerous place". But we didn't listen to that. We ignored him and went ahead. When we reached half way we heard a sound from behind as if somebody or something was following us. We were all so afraid to look back. One of us screamed RUN and started running. We all joined him and reached the house very quickly than we expected. We still don't know whether the sound we heard was from any ghosts or that old man we met or any other animals..but we knew one thing for sure. Never to take that path again especially during night.
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haha..a very good try and good imagination..:)..
And you showed the courage to take my challenge..way to go...(thumps up)
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suddenly, one of my friends yelled, we all totally scared by him, "what is wrong?" i try to calm down and shouted. The rest of my friends run while bawled, abbruptly, a big hole appeared in front of us, because of night, we didnt find that hole, we all falled into it...
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