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Cocker Spaniel
It was a cold morning with dull clouds and vile winds, she lifted her mug and quickly sipped the last gulp of cold coffee. It has to be today she thought to herself. Even though with Despite all her mental efforts, she couldn't keep her feet from going up and down, tapping the floor increasingly, making her neighboor downstairs raise his eyebrow and mumble curses while he curled himself up to go back to sleep.
She'd been thinking about her dog, a beautiful caramel brown Cocker Spaniel, which could've fit perfectly her lap at that time and calmed her anxiety, perhaps even given her a little cherful smile with the fluffly tail and gentle eyes, but her dog was no longer with her and neither was the warm feeling.
The clock was striking seven and the time has come for her to leave. She dragged herself to the kitchen and poured some water inside the cup, her hands were trembling, her vision slowly getting blurrier at the corners - something wasn't right. She'd forgotten to take her pills again and once she wasn't under medication her mind could be tricky.... did she even have a dog before?
[Good, descriptive.]
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