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About my favorite's books
Hi all! My name is Mariya. I'm from Moscow, at Russia, and I'm 23 years old. I like English, and I want to speak English it very well. And I also like to read a books yet. And I want to tell you about two of my favorite's books. The first My two One of my favorite's books it's a is "Flowers for Algernon" by Daniel Keyes. It's really great the book, and I'm very like it a lot. (you've already said it's one of your favorite books, so we know you like it very much and that its's great) This is the book is about Charly, the a man who is subnormal (I believe there is probably a better word to use, but I'd need to know the story to provide you with it) and who is involved in an the experiment for up to increase his intellect. And My other favourite's book, writed id also written by Keyes as welll, It's named a is called "The Minds of Billy Milligan". It's based on a true story, about the a man who had a number of personalities. It's the books I read I read these books in their my native language, but I also read books in English too. For example, now I am reading now a "The Perks of Being a Wallflower" by Stephen Chbosky. I saw the film based on the book with Emma Watson, Logan Lerman and Ezra Miller, and I liked it.
Thank you for your attention!
These are my humble corrections. I hope they were helpful. Goodluck learning English!
Jonathan
About my favorite's books
Hi all! My name is Mariya. I'm from Moscow, in Russia. I'm 23 years old. I like English and I want to speak English very well. Also, I like to read a books now. And I want to tell you about two of my favorite books. One of my two favorite books is a "Flowers for Algernon" by Daniel Keyes. It's really a great the book, and I very like it very much. This is a book about Charly, a man who is subnormal and who is involved in the experiment to increase his intellect. My other favourite book was written by Keyes also. It's named "The Minds of Billy Milligan". It's based on a true story, about a man who had a number of personalities. It's the books I read these books in my native language, but I read books in English, also. For example, I read now "The Perks of Being a Wallflower" by Stephen Chbosky. I saw the film based on the book with Emma Watson, Logan Lerman and Ezra Miller, and I liked it.
Thank you for your attention!
[Your English is basically good. Like most Russian speakers, you have a little trouble with articles (a,an,the), because the Russian language doesn't use them that much. You probably want to avoid starting a sentence with 'and'. It is allowed sometimes, but is usually considered bad form.]
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