Please help me in my Cover letter
Hoang Ha Giang
Linh Ho village, Vi Xuyen district, Ha Giang provine
Mobile: 0973804220
Email: [email protected]
Thai Nguyen April 24, 2013
Bujeon Vietnam Electronics co., Ltd
Phuong Lieu, Que Vo, Bac Ninh
Re : Staff producer
Dear Sir,
In reply to your advertisement in the Newspaper, I am pleased to enclose my C.V to apply for the staff producer position of your company.
From my C.V, you will see that, I graduated from Thai Nguyen university of technology with a good bachelor degree. I am on class’s top about academic achievement. I’m sociable and I was Love and esteem by my classmate and teachers.
In addition, I am active and enthusiastic. I am willing to learn and do what takes to get a job done well even under pressure or on far mission.
I am looking forward to an interview at your office.
Yours faithfully,
Hoang Ha Giang
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Please help me in my Cover letter
Hoang Ha Giang
Linh Ho village, Vi Xuyen district, Ha Giang provine
Mobile: 0973804220
Email: [email protected]
Thai Nguyen April 24, 2013
Bujeon Vietnam Electronics co., Ltd
Phuong Lieu, Que Vo, Bac Ninh
Re : Staff producer
Dear Sir,
In reply to your advertisement in the Newspaper, I am pleased to enclose my C.V to apply for the staff producer position of in your company.
From Through my C.V, you will see that I graduated from Thai Nguyen university of technology with a good grade of bachelor degree. I was a top student in class on class’s top about academic achievement. I’m sociable and I was Love and gets esteem by my classmates and teachers. (NB:i have little confused about "i was love"?)
In addition, I am active and enthusiastic person. I am willing to learn and do (my job as well as i can) what takes to get a job done well even under pressure or on far mission.
I am looking forward to the an interview at your office.
Yours faithfully,
Hoang Ha Giang
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Please help me in my Cover letter
Hoang Ha Giang
Linh Ho village, Vi Xuyen district, Ha Giang provine
Mobile: 0973804220
Email: [email protected]
Thai Nguyen April 24, 2013
Bujeon Vietnam Electronics co., Ltd
Phuong Lieu, Que Vo, Bac Ninh
Re : Staff producer
Dear Sir,
In reply to your advertisement in the Newspaper, I am pleased to enclose my C.V to apply for the staff producer position of your company.
From my C.V, you will see that, I graduated from Thai Nguyen university of technology with an applicable bachelor's degree. I am at (or "near" - you don't want to say something false on a resume!!!) the top of my class's academic achievement percentile. I’m sociable and I was loved and esteemed by my classmates and teachers.
In addition, I am active and enthusiastic. I am willing to learn and to invest the effort to get a job done well even under pressure and also on a long-term project. (I think that's what you mean, in regards to the last clause.)
I hope very much to be interviewed at your office.
Yours truly,
Hoang Ha Giang
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