are parents best teachers?

When asked about are parents best teachers, most people say yes, but many other people regard parents the first teacher rather than the best. I personally agree with the second idea.
Parents are most committed and involved in teaching their children and have an instinct to sacrifice themselves for the betterment of their children. After we were born, they became the closest people to us, and how to raise a child successfully became the most dominant problem towards them. Our parents always want us to have the best things in the world; however can those best things ensure a good future? Or let’s get down to the earth to admit that parents usually involved in the confusion of spoiling and loving children.
When teenagers become adolescents, usually parents have difficulties with communication between their children. They want us obey their ideas without any argument, but unfortunately, however, this can be a worst way to teach young people. For instance, the phenomenon of overemphasis on early success let the parents addicted to comparing children among their fellows and school mates, as a result parents will go in to wrong ways to push children to an ideal punch.
What is more, the knowledge of our parents is limited. Children need a variety of teachers to build their attitude to the real world. To be an independent individual, we need parents’ love and morality teaching, to be a useful person, we need teachers’ knowledge, to be a responsible people, we need all the friends around us.


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Very well written. A few corrections below.

are parents the best teachers?

When asked about are parents the best teachers, most people say yes, but many other people regard parents the first teacher rather than the best. I personally agree with the second idea. 
Parents are most committed and involved in teaching their children and have an instinct to sacrifice themselves for the betterment of their children. After we were born, they became the closest people to us, and how to raise a child successfully became their most dominant problem towards them. Our parents always want us to have the best things in the world; however can those best things ensure a good future? Or let’s get down to the earth to admit that parents are usually involved in the confusion of  confused between spoiling and loving children. 
When teenagers become adolescents, usually parents have difficulties with  in communication between with their children. They want us to obey their ideas without any argument, but unfortunately, however, this can be a the worst way to teach young people. For instance, the phenomenon of overemphasis on early success lets the parents get addicted to comparing children among their fellows and school mates, and as a result parents will go in to wrong ways to push children to an ideal punch. (punch?)
What is more Moreover, the knowledge of our parents is limited. Children need a variety of teachers to build their attitude to the real world. To be an independent individual, we need parents’ love and morality teaching, to be a useful person, we need teachers’ knowledge, to be a responsible people, we need all the friends around us.