April 22, 2013
Mr. Thomas Jiang
Sales Manager
Zhejiang, China

Dear Mr. Jiang,

I want to express my gratitude for your warm hospitality given to me during my recent visit to your beautiful country.

On behalf of our company’s delegate (is there only one? If plural use delegates), I would also like to thank you for your consideration regarding my accommodations, travel route, and delicious meals. (“sumptuous banquet” is singular as well, was there only one banquet you are specifically thanking him for? If so, then say “…, and the sumptuous banquet.”) Your staff was very knowledgeable and, in particular, my accompanying interpreter was both professional and friendly. Because of this, I had a very convenient and enjoyable journey in Zhejiang.

And last but not least (I might just say “Lastly,”) thank you again (if you are reiterating a point, don’t use “And last but not least” but if you are not repeating or summing up then don’t use “again”) for your kind entertainment. I hope I may be able to return your hospitality in the near future.

Cordially, (“Sincerely” is what we normally use. Cordially is fine though.)

Henry Miller