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Journal It is busy but substantial and exciting this week, which make me crazy. Although I am exhausted, I am still satisfied and happy. Last week, Miss Huang asked me to make a presentation for a well-known psychologist, Freud. In order to display a good introduction, I looked for information on the Internet. It seemed so easy to make an introduction, but I was wrong. You need to select information which are clear but brief on your own. It is no use copying the material directly. In the end, I spent almost four hours making this courseware. After finished that, I needed to mark off new words, learn how to pronounce them and figure out their meaning. Finally, I relieved after I introduce Freud to the whole class fluently. At the same time, Miss Huang praised me that I showed a good presentation. Suddenly, I felt a sense of achievement and happiness. I come to realize that the success of a small matter is enough to bring me joy. There is no doubt that happiness is the most precious thing in the world.

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It is busy but substantial and exciting this week, which makes me crazy. Although I am exhausted, I am still satisfied and happy.

Last week, Miss Huang asked me to make a presentation about a well-known psychologist, Freud. In order to display a good introduction, I looked for information on the Internet. It seemed so easy to make an introduction, but I was wrong. You need to select information which is clear but brief on your own. It is no use copying the material directly. In the end, I spent almost four hours making this coursework. After finishing that, I needed to mark off new words, learn how to pronounce them and figure out their meaning.

Finally, I was relieved after I introduce Freud to the whole class fluently. At the same time, Miss Huang praised me that I showed a good presentation. Suddenly, I felt a sense of achievement and happiness.

I come to realize that the success of a small matter is enough to bring me joy. There is no doubt that happiness is the most precious thing in the world.

 

makes me crazy - We use the present continuous when using this saying.

presentation about - If you make a presentation for someone, they are present. You made the presentation for your class.  Freud has been dead for a long time.  You could also have said "...a presentation of Freud," but about is a better word.

Information has no plural form, so use the singular is to modify it.

 

If your presentation was as good as your writing, you have a reason to be proud. Nice job!

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