What a depressed day!!!
Last night I chated with a nice girl, deeply a greet girl, I had never meeted.But I just want talk about something for fun. I know a secret about her. It is pity that I can't believe I just know it. I just want to talk with her in a relaxed atmosiphere, like a stranger in her life, persuade her. Absolutely she doesn't want to share something. I think I feel curious about her.
I can not approach her deeply thought. I think I must more sincere to her. That will be fine.
I must do someting to improving our relation. Because I analysis that we have simlar personality. I want to make friends with her.
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What a depressing day!!!
Last night I chatted with a nice girl, deeply greeted the girl, who I had never met. But I just wanted talk about something for fun. I know a secret about her. It is pity that I can't believe that just I just know it. I just want to talk with her in a relaxed atmosiphere, like a stranger in her life, persuade her. She absolutely doesn't want to share something. I think I feel curious about her.
I can not approach her deepest thought. I think I must be more sincere to her. That will be fine.
I must do someting to improve our relation. Because I have analyzed that we have simlar personalities. I want to make friends with her.
[Basics are good. My advice - take your time and be patient. Don't try to force things to go faster.]
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慢慢来，别着急
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ehem!
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