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Please, correct me) Thanks) Three days ago I was at a birthday party and met there new people, that were very friendly and talkative. Topics of conversation were really various - new digital technologies, modern literature, relationships between people, favourite music styles and so on. It was interesting and funny. By the way many of these people had good sense of humor and very ironic views on life. I'm glad that I have met these people.

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Three days ago I was at a birthday party and met there some new people, that were very friendly and talkative. Topics of conversation were really various (You can say, "The conversation topics really varied" or "There were various conversation topics") - new digital technologies, modern literature, relationships between people, favourite music styles and so on. It was interesting and funny. By the way, many of these people had a good sense of humor and very ironic views on life. I'm glad that I have met these people.

 

Good job with your notebook entry. Sounds like a lovely party. :)

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Three days ago I was at a birthday party and met there new people, they were very friendly and talkative. There were various topics of conversation - new digital technologies, modern literature, relationships between people, favourite music styles and so on. It was interesting and funny. By the way many of these people had good sense of humor and very ironic views on life. I'm glad that I have met these people.

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Three days ago (back) I was at a birthday party and met few new people there, they were very friendly and talkative. We talked alot about various things  - new digital technologies, modern literature, relationships between people, favourite music styles and so on. It was interesting and funny. By the way many of these people had good sense of humor and very ironic views on life. I'm glad that I have met these people.

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Three days ago I was at a birthday party and there met there new people, all that were very friendly and talkative. Topics of conversation were really varied various - new digital technologies, modern literature, relationships between people (between people is redundant) favourite music styles and so on. It was interesting and funny. By the way many of these people had good sense of humor and very ironic views on life. I'm glad that I have met these people.

 

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Oh!!! Very nice party I like visit party like this)

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