Feeling
Feeling are wonderful.You never touch them,you never smell them ,you never see them but you feel them.We have various kinds of feelings even though you never pay attention to them. I felt good this afternoon but i was feeling bad now. Feeling change at every single minute. I'm a sensitive people and i always feel something in the outside world.I can't chang that because it's the personality.It's an old word in China and it's meaning is that:It's easier to move the mountain than to change one's personaliy.And i suppose that it's properly.
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Feelings
Feelings are wonderful. You never touch them, you never smell them, you never see them but you feel them. We have various kinds of feelings even though you (we) never pay attention to them. I felt good this afternoon but I am feeling bad now. Feelings change at every single minute. I'm a sensitive person and I always feel something in the outside world. I can't change that because it's the (my) personality. It's an old word (saying or expression) in China and it's meaning is that: It's easier to move the mountain than to change one's personality. And I suppose (that) it's true.
Between () = not really an error. Just could be more clear.
About punctuation: You could also better use a space between sentences. After the dot, one space, then a new sentence. After a comma also a space is used mostly.
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Yes most of times it is easier to move mountain than change personality. That is why it is so important to teach kids what is right and wrong. Otherwise they may not learn later in life. Nice text yes. We should find feelings about little things in every day. That will give us more chance to be happier while not needing too much for happiness :)
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very nice text. I agree with that old word :)
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