The Worst Garden

Mr. Jones has own one of the best most beautiful gardens in our town.
Every year, our town have has a "BEST GARDEN COMPETITION", and even though almost everyone will be attends, and Mr. Jones has is the winner every time.
Mr Bill's garden has a bigger garden than the Mr. Jones's one, and he is more hardworking works harder than him Jone,.  He plants a great many of flowers and vegetables, but the Mr. Jones's garden is still more interesting.
Jones's garden makes a neat path, and has  build a wooden bridge on the over a pool.
I'd like the garden too, but I cannot work hard.
I also attend the garden competition in every year, but I always have receive a putty medal because it's the worst garden.

*What do you mean by I'd like the garden too ?

** I'm sorry to hear that your garden is the worst.  It's time to start working hard! =)

The Worst Garden

Mr. Jone owns the most beatiful garden in our town.
Every year our town has a "BEST GARDEN COMPETITION", and almost everyone attends. Mr. Jone always wins.
Mr. Bill's garden is bigger than Mr. Jone's. In addition, Mr. Bill is more more hardworking than Mr. Jone, and Mr. Bill planted several more flowers and vegetables than Mr. Jone. However, Mr. Jone's garden is still more interesting than Mr. Bill's.
Mr. Jone's garden makes a neat path and has a wooden bridge over its pond.
I'd like to have garden too, but I am not hard working.
I also attend the garden competition every year, but I always receive a putty medal because my garden is the worst.