lucky

We talked about luck in the class today. Most of students believed in chance and faith. I disagreed with them because I think we, as humans, are more independent. I believe in God, who guides us and can do everything but I believe in our willing too. In fact, we can't do whatever we want but we aren't completely constrained. Everybody have has some opportunities in the life, somebody use them and somebody miss them. If we are optimistic and work hard work hard, we will have better lives.
Many people say "If I had been born in a better family I would have had more opportunities.". It may be true but if we think in this way, with no doubt, we will be depressed and lose more things, even our possessions. So, I try to believe in myself and my capabilities. I think self-confidence is more important than luck.

Not very many corrections needed. Good job, Razie. :)

We talked about luck in the class today. Most of the students believe in chance and faith. I disagree with them because I think we, humans, are more independent. I believe in God—who guides us and can do everything—but I believe in our willingness too. In fact, We can't do whatever we want but we aren't completely constrained. Everybody has some opportunities in the life. Some use them and some miss them. If we are optimistic and work hard, we will have better lives.

Many people say "If I had been born in a better family I would have had more opportunities." That may be true, but If we think in this way, with no doubt, we will be depressed and lose even more things than our possessions. So, I try to believe in myself and my capabilities. I think self-confidence is more important than luck.

lucky

We talked about luck in the class today. Most of students believed in chance and faith. I disagreed with them because I think we, humans, are more independent. I believe in a God who guides us and can do everything but I believe in our willing too we also have free will. In fact, we can't do whatever we want but we aren't completely constrained. Everybody have has some opportunities in the life, somebody some people use them and somebody others miss them. If we are optimistic and work hard, we will have better lives.
Many people say "If I had been born in a better family I would have had more opportunities". It may be true but If we think in this way, with no doubt, we will be depressed and lose more things even than our possessions. So, I try to believe in myself and my capabilities. I think self-confidence is more important than luck.

I like your entry!  I agree with you.  I believe that we make our own "luck" by our choices and decisions.  Our futures aren't set in stone, so with hard work and confidence we should be able to do anthing.