Corrections · 3
This is so deep and full of meaning! You conceptually did veell well on this. I have made simple corrections for you.
Why are most Chinese college students more interested in these things?
Why are we more interested in passing the exam than studying itself?
Why are we more interested in how to make a living than how to make a life?
Why are we more interested in defining success than determining happiness? (I added a verb here, to have a consistent style throughout the piece)
Why do we care more about "Was it a victory?" than, "Was it fun?"?
Why do we only focus on the general psychology, ignoring the very psyche aspects?
Why do we think a lot more about "How am I?" than "How are we?"?
Any response will be appreciated.
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