Nice Time for My Birthday

On my When I 20th olds birthday, I spent a most pleasant day. That day, my mother, my friend_and I traveled to NeiMengGu grassland. NeiMengGu is a one of the most beautiful places in China. It There is such a beautiful place. It There has a vast grassland and blue sky. I could see (or, "I saw..") a group of sheep were eating grass and ranging over the grassland. It was nice scenery. Afterwards, I learned to ride horse and shoot archery with my friend. It was my first time I tried to ride a horse. I felt very scared. But so quickly, I didn’t scare. I began to enjoy it.
At dinner, we ate barbecue in the tent. The tent is very special. It is so big and warm. The local people like to live in this tent. So I had a birthday party in the tent. Local people like dance and singing. They sang some birthday song in their language with a dance for me. I could feel they are so hot. I really enjoyed that day. That was a nice time.

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Nice time for my birthday

When my 20 years old I am20 olds birthday, I spent a most pleasant day. At the time This day, my mother, my friend, and me traveled to in NeiMengGu grassland. NeiMengGu is a one of the most beautiful place in China. It is a so beautiful place. It There has a vast grassland and blue sky. I could see can saw a group of sheep were eating grass and ranging over the grassland. It was nice scenery. Afterwards. I learned to ride horse and archery with my friend. It was my first time tried to ride a horse. I felt very scared. But so quickly, I didn’t scare. I began to enjoy.
At dinner, we ate barbecue in the tent. The tent is very specially. It was so big and warm. The local people like to live in this tent. So I had a birthday party in the tent. Local people like dance and singing. They sang same birthday song in their language with dance for to me. I can felt they are so hot. I really enjoy that day. That was a nice time.

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