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Lost. Who am I? Where am I? I’m feeling lost , I’m not able to see anything, I can’t listen any sound, any noise. I lost my mind, I’m going crazy. I try to fly into this undefined black sky, I try to swim into this deep dark sea with no one lighthouse as lifeline. The silence is so strong that I can hear my heartbeat. Where are my parents? Where are my sons? I need to fight to looking for them, I must find them. No love , no feel, no life when we are lonely. Suddenly I hear a far sweet voices of children. I open my eyes, I was sleeping, It was a nightmare. My sons are playing in the garden in a warm shining spring day while my wife is reading a book. Now I know which is the meaning of nightmares. To taste that sweet sensation of the beautiful moments of our life. That are the few.

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Who am I?
Where am I?
I’m feeling lost , I’m not able to see anything, I can’t HEAR any sound, any noise. I HAVE lost my mind, I’m going crazy.
I try to fly into this undefined black sky, I try to swim into this deep dark sea with no lighthouse as A lifeline.
The silence is so strong that I can hear my heartbeat. Where are my parents? Where are my sons? I need to fight to LOOK for them, I must find them. No love , no FEELINGS, no life when we are lonely.
Suddenly I hear THE far OFF sweet voices of children. I open my eyes, I was sleeping, It was a nightmare.
My sons are playing in the garden ON a BRIGHT warm spring day while my wife is reading a book.
Now I know WHAT is the meaning of nightmares. To taste that sweet sensation of the beautiful moments of our life. THESE ARE few.

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