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Wonderful weekend! Hey guys... what's up! How are you doing? I am doing amazing! Why?! Because I passed my whole weekend with my family. It's more than enough to make me feel very happy. I have 2 sisters and 3 nephews. We had a wonderful barbecue in my house yesterday and we had a lot of fun together. On Sunday my sister and I made pancakes. it was amazing!! We're very united and we get along with each other. My family is all for me. I hope to stay forever by theirs side.

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Wonderful weekend!

Hey guys... what's up!
How are you doing?
I am doing amazing! Why?! Because I spent my whole weekend with my family.
It's more than enough to make me feel very happy. I have 2 sisters and 3 nephews.
We had a wonderful barbecue at my house yesterday and we had a lot of fun together.
On Sunday, my sister and I made pancakes. It was amazing!!
We're very close and we get along well with each other.
My family is everything to me. I hope to stay forever by their side.

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Wonderful weekend!

Hey guys... what's up!
How are you doing?
I am doing amazing! Why?! Because I passed my whole weekend with my family.
It's more than enough to make me feel very happy. I have 2 sisters and 3 nephews.
We had a wonderful barbecue in my house yesterday and we had a lot of fun together.
On Sunday my sister and I made pancakes. it was amazing!!
We're very united and we get along with each other.
My family is all for me. I hope to stay forever by theirs side.

 

1. I am feeling amazing or I am doing great. We don't really say "I am doing amazing" in English, even though it might sound correct to you. 

2. Because I spent my whole weekend with my family. Nesta frase, você tem que usar o verbo "spend" porque é assim que o inglês funciona, mano. :)

3. their

 

Há outros erros, mas não são definidos..."We're very united", não posso explicar o erro mesmo, mas deve usar outro adjetivo. "My family is all for me", outra vez eu não consigo explicar o erro, mas é malsonante a frase.

 

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