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I present to you... I want to improve my english vonversation, because i am been going to San Diego the next week. I lived in New York, and i studied american english, but only for three months. Actually i work in nursery, but i hope to go way from Italy. I like sport, and i practice aerobic, snow, kite surf, i love all type of sport. My hobby is cake art, painting. I hope that there aren't many errors. Kisses

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I present to you...

I want to improve my English conversation, because I am been going to San Diego the next week. I lived in New York, and I studied American English, but only for three months. Actually I work in a nursery, but I hope to leave go way from Italy. I like sports, and I practice enjoy aerobics, snow, and kite surfing. I love all types of sports. My hobbies are cake art and painting. I hope that there aren't too many errors here. Kisses

 

Hi Ciossy,

I'm not sure what you mean when you say that you practice snow. Snow is just the cold, white stuff that falls from the sky in the winter. Do you mean "snow-boarding"?  We usually don't say that we're "practicing" a sport, but rather that we enjoy the sport or participate in the sport. "Participate" would be used more when the sport is a team sport or a competitive sport. In the USA, when you say you work in a nursery, it can mean that you work in a place where plants are grown for sale, or that you work in a place where children are cared for! Which one do you mean? Also, we don't usually kiss people unless we know them very well. You are doing well! ~Rebecca

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I present to you...

I want to improve my english conversation, because i am going to San Diego next week. I lived in New York, and i studied american english, but only for three months. Actually i work in a nursery in Italy, but i hope to move abroad. I like sport, and i practice aerobics, snowboarding?, kite surfing?, i love all types of sport. My hobby is cake art, painting. I hope that there aren't many errors. Kisses

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