To be or not to be?

I really want to make improve my English beter and beter, as it is my favorite language. But However, i found find this it is worse and worse hard........ the language must be practiced everyday.
When I was at high school in Taiwan, my first class was at 7;:00, and when i I couldn't go home it's until it was already 17;:00 , moreover, i haved to go to cram school after iI finished school until 21;:00. Finally It's only after this that I could finally  i really can go home where I'd have a lot of homework and text set texts to read.
God {Using 'God' is quite offensive to Catholics and religious people. Gosh is more socially accepted} Gosh! iIt's is such a terrible educatiomn system! This is how it was starting from one 1st grade up until to nine 9th grade time.
Now, I am a college student. Thate terrible system has only improved a little, happily though, as I didnt don't have to go to cram school, well...not yet. ^^
I want to learn English in the case of no pressure there full time, it is a dream for me. - {Sorry, I don't know what you mean by this.} 
I wish hope that one day, I can will be able to speak it fluently.

To be or not to be?

I really want to make my English better and better. It is my favorite language. <Space> But I found it is getting worse and worse........ Language must be practiced everyday.
In Taiwan, my first class started at 7:00, and when I could go home it was already 17:00. Moreover I had to go to cram school after I got off school until 21:00. Finally when I really could go home, I had a lot of homework and texts to read.
God! It was a terrible education. That was my grade one to nine grade nine years.
Now, I am a college student. My life has only improved a little, happily, I don't have to go to cram school, well...not yet. ^^
I want to learn English

Sorry, I do not know what this means

in the case of no pressure there full time,

it is a dream for me.
I wish that one day I can speak fluently

Good. Because the first part is all past, you need a more complicated tense.

Always a capital for "I".

..have to go to cram school from when I get off school until 21:00 ... <-- also an option

I wish one day to speak fluently <-- another option

huayangqi's answer was good, only a few little things.

To be or not to be?

I really want to make my English beter and beter, it is my favorite language.But i found it is worse and worse........language must be practice everyday.
In Taiwan, my first class at 7;00, and when i can go reaches home it's became already 17;00 , moreover after that ,i have to go to cram school after i off school it is over until 21;00. Finally i really by that time i reaches can go home,i have a lot of homework and text.
God! it is a terrible educatiom. it is my one grade to nine grade time.
Now, i am a college student. That terrible only improve a little, happily thanks God, i did don't have to go to cram school, well...not yet. ^^
i want to learn English in the case of no pressure , if there is full time, it is a dream for me.
i wish one day I can will able to speak fluently

Time has to spare, if you wish you can spare time. It is Mantra

To be or not to be?

I really want to make my English beter and beter, it is my favorite language.Buti found I find  it is worse and worse........language must be practice practiced everyday.
In Taiwan, my first class was at 7;00, and when i can could go home it's already 17;00 ,moreover i have had to go to cram school after i off school until 21;00. Finally i could really can go home,i have had a lot of homework and text tests. (Maybe?)
God! it is was a terrible educatiom education. it is was from my Grade One to Grade Nine one grade to nine grade time.
Now, i am a college student. That terrible only improve a little,(what do you mean, please?) happily, i didnt don't have to go to cram school, well...not yet. ^^
i want to learn English in the case of no pressure there full time, it is a dream for me.
i wish one day I can speak fluently

台湾吗？啊，那应该会说中文，我不是NATIVE SPEAKER，所以可能会有改错的地方，请多指教。。大小写和字母的拼写要注意一下。。