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Hiking It was a sunny day yesterday. I went out hiking to a mountain named Qingcheng Mountain close to Chengdu. Qingcheng Mountain is the cradleland of Taoism. There are a lot of temples in those mountains. The mountain is very tall. There are two ways going to the top of the mountain. The first one is to take a cable car,the second one is going to the top of the mountain by foot. I choosed the foot by foot way. It took me more than two hours to arrive the top of the mountain. I was too tired when I finally arrive the top of the mountain. But I think it was worthful to take the foot by foot way because the view on the road was so good. After 2 minutes resting,I started enjoying the view of the mountain. It was so beautiful looking around from the top of the mountain. I took a cable car when I went down to the foot of the mountain. There were an interesting service on the mountain. Some people provide litters to carry visitors to make a living. I saw some people experienced the litter service but I dare not to. I think it too dangerous to sit on a litter on the mountain road. 我不知道爬山应该用哪个动词,请本土的朋友帮我改正,谢谢!

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Hiking

It was a sunny day yesterday. I went out hiking to a mountain named Qingcheng Mountain close to Chengdu. Qingcheng Mountain is the cradle-land (birthplace sounds better) of Taoism. There are a lot of temples in those mountains.
The mountain is very tall. There are two ways going to (of getting to/to get to) the top of the mountain. The first one is to take a cable car, the second one is going to walk to the top of the mountain by foot (changed for voice agreement). I choosed the foot to go by foot way. It took me more than two hours to arrive at the top of the mountain. I was too very tired when I finally arrived at the top of the mountain, but I think it was worthful worthwhile to take the foot go by foot way because the view on the road was so good.
After 2 minutes of resting,I started enjoying the view of the mountain. It was so beautiful looking around from the top of the mountain. I took a cable car when I went returned down to the foot of the mountain.
There were was an interesting service on the mountain. Some people provided litters to carry visitors to make a living. I saw some people experienceding the litter service but I dared not to. I think it too dangerous to sit on a litter on the mountain road.

我不知道爬山应该用哪个动词,请本土的朋友帮我改正,谢谢!

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