I am a girl from China. I am currently in highschool. My name is Wang Jinging, but you can called me Jingjing. I am fluent in Chinese, so if you have any troubles with Chinaese, I can help you. My favorite color is purple, because purple looks have temperament (it's difficult to describe colours) and my hobbies include drawing picture. My dog, [insert name] (does 'Dog' have a name?) is a very important friend to me, but when he/she gets angry, he/she makes me feel scared. After school, I surf the Internet. I am always on QQ. I like to make friends. You can add me on QQ: 1770045000. To tell the truth, I do not like go to school, I hate shool. For China's education I am very sad ('The Chinese education system does not cater for my needs', 'I dislike the education in China')

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I am a girl, from China. I am a high school student now. My name is Wang Jinging. You can call me Jingjing. Becuse I am a Chinese, if you have touble with Chinese, I can help you. My favorite color is purple, because purple has temperament. My hobby is drawing pictures. A dog is my very important friend. But if my dog gets angry with me, I am so scared. After shool, I can surf the Internet. I am always on the QQ. I like to make friends. You can add me as a good friend in QQ 1770045000. To tell the truth, I do not like go to shool - I hate shool. For China's education, I am very sad.

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I'm Wang Jinging (You can call me Jingjing). I am a Chinese girl and study in high shool. I can help you with your learning Chinese. My favorite color is purple, and I personally think that purple stands for graceful temperament. Dogs are my very important friends. But I would be scared if a dog gets anyry. I like painting and making friends. If you'd like, add me on QQ. My QQ ID is1770045000. Honestly I don't like schools. I'm upset about Chinese educational system.