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My reading review of Alice's Adventures in Wonderland Alice sits under the tree. Her sister is reading a book but Alice feels bored. Suddenly, a white rabbit runs past her.She runs after the rabbit and falls into a rabbit hole. She meets a lot of strange people and things, such as the March Hare,the Mad Hatter and so on. At last she finds, it just a wonderful dream. The Stories of this book are so absurd but funny. So I love this book. Alice asks everyone:"Who am I?" Because she always change her height. In our daily lives, We also ask ourselves:"Who am I?" I am who I am, I'm the one and the only. We don't have to change and change. So me should make our lives more wonderful. My English isn't very well but I'll work harder^ ^Please point out my mistakes, thanks!

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My reading review of Alice's Adventures in Wonderland.

Alice sits under the tree. Her sister is reading a book but Alice feels bored. Suddenly, a white rabbit runs past her. She runs after the rabbit and falls into a rabbit hole. She meets a lot of strange people and things, such as the March Hare, the Mad Hatter and so on. At last she realizes it is just a wonderful dream.
The Stories in this book are so absurd but funny, so I love this book.
Alice asks everyone: "Who am I?" Because, for example, she always changes her height. In our daily lives, we also ask ourselves: "Who am I?" But I think I am who I am. I'm the one and the only. We don't have to change and change. So me should make our lives more wonderful.

My English isn't very good but I'll work harder^ ^Please point out my mistakes, thanks!

 

Hey your English is pretty good! A couple of mistakes are using upper case letters (ASHSKLL), spaces after punctuation, and the occasional vocabulary mistake. I am the one and only... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=heR0HA9hFhQ

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