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End of watch Last night I watched a movie, that was the "End of watch". I thought there was an English subtitle, but there wasn't. I thought, never mind, I can watch it without subtitles. But the languages was to difficult, there were too much foreign words, and the people were speaking very fast. But fortunately, I understood a lot. So at the end, I wondered, because I could cry, and I felt the sad end of the story. When I went to the bed, after this experience, I was very happy, to watched another English movie.

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End of watch

Last night I watched a movie, that was the "End of watch". I thought there was an English subtitle, but there wasn't. I thought, never mind, I can watch it without subtitles. But the languages was to difficult, there were too much foreign words, and the people were speaking very fast. But fortunately, I understood a lot. So at the end, I wondered, because I could cry, and I felt the sad end of the story. When I went to the bed, after this experience, I was very happy, to watched another English movie.

 

Last night I watched a movie that was called "End of Watch". I thought there were English subtitles but there wasn't. I though to myself  "never mind, I can watch it without subtitles". The language was difficult, there were many foreign words, and the people were speaking very fast.Fortunatley I understood a lot. So at the end I could cry and feel the sad ending of the story. (After this experience I went to bed very happy because I watched another English movie.)

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When I went to bed I was very happy about this experience because I watched another English movie.

 

 

--I took out the two "too" because it tells the reader that you couldn't watch the movie. However you could! congratulations!

 

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