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The importance of the money Really, money is very important for most things. All up of it. But if you think about this a lot, you don't willing to dwell on it. The money is mere material thing and the major sign is that you can't explain it . The friends, your relationship with someone... But sometimes I ask me how something so simple can organize the world of this way. Maybe, the answer can be the ambition. First of all, is a moral thought. Yes, the money to a lot of people is the first step in order to classify each person. And everyone else don't say anything to try to change it. It should be neither exploitation nor missery. Everyone are equal.

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The importance of the money

Really, money is very important for most things. All up of it[?]. But if you think about this a lot, you aren't willing to dwell on it. The money is a mere material thing and the major sign of this is that you can't explain it . The friends, your relationship with someone...
But sometimes, I ask myself how something so simple can organize the world in this way. Maybe the answer can be the ambition. First of all, it is a moral thought. Yes, to a lot of people, the money to a lot of people is the first step used in order to classify each person. And everyone else doesn't say anything to try to change it. It should be neither exploitation nor misery. Everyone is equal.

 

[Good.  Your point is well-made.  'Everyone' is considered as a singular.]

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