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Talking about the best soccer team in Minas Gerais Miller is an Atlético Mineiro supporter and David is a Cruzeiro supporter. In Brazil the most teams have a mascot, then Atlético Mineiro is “the rooster” and Cruzeiro is “the fox”. Talking about the best soccer team in Minas Gerais Miller: Hello David, what’s up? David: Hey Miller, it’s all up! Miller: Good, you saw the games on the weekend? David: Yes, Cruzeiro won 4 to 1. Miller: Oh that’s good, Atlético won 4 to 0. The rooster ever is the best, right? David: Never! Go ahead and try to convince me. Miller: Ok, let´s go. The rooster never gives up, because of this he is known as “the avenger”. Furthermore, now our main team is the best of Brazil! David: Maybe it’s true, but who have more major championships? Miller: Ok is Cruzeiro, but have a long time since Cruzeiro didn’t gets nothing … David: Unfortunately right, but this year we will win many championships! Miller: Common man, wake up! Your team is so bad… David: I disagree with you, now our team is one of the best Brazilian teams. Miller: Haha… Are you kidding me? Since the rooster picked up Ronaldinho Gaucho and Tardelli we are the best! David: Oh gosh… Rooster supporters talk so much! We will see who the best in the next matches… Miller: Ok, I’m anxiously waiting for it! David: See you man! Miller: See you, bye!

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Talking about the best soccer team in Minas Gerais

Miller is an Atlético Mineiro supporter and David is a Cruzeiro supporter.
In Brazil the most teams have a mascot, then Atlético Mineiro's is “the rooster” and Cruzeiro's is “the fox”.

Talking about the best soccer team in Minas Gerais

Miller: Hello David, what’s up?
David: Hey Miller, not much man!  What's going on with? 
Miller: Ah, nothing really.   did you see the games over the weekend?
David: Yes, Cruzeiro won 4 to 1.
Miller: Oh that’s good, Atlético won 4 to 0. The rooster is always the best, right? 

David: Yeah right! Go ahead and try to convince me.
Miller: Ok, let´s go. The rooster never gives up and that is why he is known as “the avenger”.
Furthermore, now our main team is the best in Brazil!
David: Maybe that’s true, but who has more major championships?
Miller: Ok...Cruzeiros, but it's been a long time since the Cruzeiros won anything…
David: Unfortunately that's right, but this year we will win many championships!
Miller: Common man, wake up! Your team is so bad…
David: I disagree with you, now our team is one of the best Brazilian teams.
Miller: Haha… Are you kidding me? Since the rooster picked up Ronaldinho Gaucho and Tardelli we are the best!
David: Oh gosh… Rooster supporters trash talk so much! We will see who is the best in the next matches…
Miller: Ok, I’m anxiously waiting for it!
David: See you man!
Miller: See you, bye!

 

 

 

Haha very good :)  Red is corrections and what I wrote in blue is more natural!  Great job.  

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